Today we wrote about being an Olympic athlete.
Danny received a Principal's Award for his story. Here it is:
I signed in for the Olympics. I signed in for the running races.
I crouched down low. We are starting to run. Now I can see the finish line. I'm really running now. All the runners are behind me now but for one moment a speedy guy came up beside me. Just one more effort. I ran past the speedy guy. I won! I'm wearing a gold medal. I am so proud of myself!
Congratulations Danny, you deserved your Principal's Award. We liked the bit when you said: 'A speedy guy caught up to me.' You also used lots of adjectives.
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Congratulations Danny. You did great writing. From George
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