Friday, 23 March 2012

Principal's Awards

We have been writing descriptions. We choose to describe a member of our family. Two people, Paige and Denver, received Principal's Awards for their writing. Congratulations, Paige and Denver, you are amazing authors. Read their descriptions below.


I have got a little sister. She is 4. Her name is Ellah. She likes butterflies and chocolate. Her favourite activities are painting and counting. She is cute and she laughs a lot. She’s cute when she’s asleep because she cuddles up with her teddy bears and sucks her thumb. She loves kittens. She’s got blonde hair. She likes playing with her friends. My sister is special. But most of all she loves me. Paige



Here is my Granny, my Mum, and me. My Granny loves to spoil me with love. My Granny also spoils me with presents, right down to the ground. She has blond and red hair. Granny is cool. Granny has lots of money. Granny has nearly travelled the world. Now that is a lots of places. She is travelling zoomy, a bit like the sun heating up a person. That’s a cool Grandma right now, isn’t it? She is great, a bit like a famous singer. She has been to New Zealand two times. That’s a lot more times than me. She has been on an aeroplane more than six times of course. Where do you think she works? Well, she works at the hospital. That is a fine place, my friend. Oh it is. She has done a lot of work. She has lots of family, probably 20. That’s a lot. It’s a very big thing. Quite good, hey?
My favourite thing about her is love and she’s very pretty, maybe the prettiest woman in town. She has brown eyes. She always wears earrings.
Denver

2 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 08, 2012

    Great description of your granny Denver from Kate and William T.

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  2. AnonymousMay 08, 2012

    Denver your story was beautiful I loved your description
    about your granny from Paige

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